Help/Comments needed about a picture for a cafe

Folks I'm working on a pic for a cafe and if you could spend two mins I would appreciate some feedback - bear in mind that what you see isn't fully finished yet but still a work in progress. There are two styles of pic and I'd like to know which one people like better if at all. Also what things you like/dislike about the pics, characters, styles etc.whatever jumps into your mind. It's going to be in a fairly clean, bright but warm cafe setting. Cream walls, lots of orange, browns, warm colours? The link is below. http://drawingsbyjamesmoore.blogspot.com/

Cheers

James